Ok everybody, I'll now open with a classic blog opening. I know it's been a long time since I've posted, so sorry. JK. I plan to post a more official post soon. But I do want to post a poem that I wrote a few months ago. Some of you may think ugh... Who likes poetry? I do. If you don't like poetry then go sort your sock drawer or something:) If you like it, please leave a comment below and let me know what you think. Here goes... By the way I actually wrote this while deer hunting, anyways...
"The Sound Of Freedom"
A stirring in the leaves
A soft and gentle breeze
The sun shines its golden hue
And lifts the heavy morning dew
The crow sounds it's morning call
Among the colored leaves of fall
The pale blue sky finally awakens
And brings back the life that night has taken
Oh to live in the midst of this paradise
To see this place through my God's eyes
No wonder the Lord said this was good
When He gazed upon this wood
How often we take for granted God's wondrous creation
Caught up in the turmoil of this twisted nation
But can we for a moment pause
And hear the sound of freedom's cause
The reason that men bled and died
Over this land many tears they cried
If we could remember again
Our saviour's call and his mighty plan
That we are the shining city on a hill
That no cold wind of corruption can chill
Now take a step back and hear the sound
Of what freedom is really all about
I've not heard that sound before
Only the sound of man's awful war
This sound is different that is for certain
But let nature lift it's hidden curtain
And hear the sound thats clear and true
The sound that God made just for you
It may be a soft and gentle breeze
Or just a stirring in the leaves.
Hope you enjoyed it. More to come soon. Peace Out.
That's really good!! I love the rhyming. I have such a hard time with that so mine don't usually rhyme! But I do have an app on my phone called Rhyme Free that really helps! :)
ReplyDeleteWhile deer hunting? Nature is so inspiring! haha...Great poem!
ReplyDeleteWow! That's really good:) I love it!
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone for commenting:)
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